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Choking on words
That were never said
Drowning in tears
That will never fall
Falling down
From broken bonds
Crushed by the burden
That people give to you
Shot by
Every single hateful word
Consumed by
Your deepest fears
Cut by
Every unfounded sharp critism
Dying on thinks
You can never die on.
But you’ve died long time ago
And no one ever noticed
Because you’ve lived on ...
That were never said
Drowning in tears
That will never fall
Falling down
From broken bonds
Crushed by the burden
That people give to you
Shot by
Every single hateful word
Consumed by
Your deepest fears
Cut by
Every unfounded sharp critism
Dying on thinks
You can never die on.
But you’ve died long time ago
And no one ever noticed
Because you’ve lived on ...
It’s something I wrote a few months ago in January. I liked how it worked out. I think that sometimes everbody feels a bit like that ...but we simply carry on 'living' and take our unhappiness further.
© 2014 - 2024 Chiolla
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I really love the last 3 verses! 
Well done!
Well done!